I write music reviews/interviews a bit, and have doen for a few years now but recently I've found that when I read them back they feel a bit hackneyed and strung together...still not entirely sure whether I have the talent for writing my school (and mum) seemed to think I have.

So, if any of you can be arsed to offer some criticism (preferably constructive) that'd be great!

http://beatsperminute.com/author/zak-padmore/